Tony's Chocolonely Paper 1

Positives

• My planning was far more refined this time.
• I planned out 5 different body paragraphs, each with 4 to 5 different authorial choices.
• My analysis was better and more organized this time as well, thanks to my better planning.

Negatives

• My planning took far longer than I had anticipated, at around 25 minutes. This meant I had to rush some parts as I was very short on time for my writing.
• A few body paragraphs ended up less cohesive than I had planned.
• I also wish I had referred back to the guiding question a bit more directly.

Overall

• Overall I think this was a big improvement from my previous papers.
• It was better formatted and had more relevant analysis.
• In the future I need to focus more on the guiding question and manage my time better.
• I would like to spend around 20 minutes for planning instead of 25. I believe some additional time was wasted as I took a long time to write my thesis statement as well.